I loved it!

You wrote most of Danny's lines perfect. You captured his cool, ignorant and straight forward character at the same time as he is caring and emotional side. Especially in the in the beginning of the story.
You also been taking a great deal of consideration of details into th characters speech... its amazing!!

Danny and Lindsey are cute, hope that they will end up togheter.... We'll neversee any romance at the Csi offices...